Calling All M.embers!!

[(¯`•Tiger•._)]

Ok here is the plot so far. Tell me what you think.

The clans have been at peace for several seasons now. But beware, Tranquility's Ending. Cats have started to disappear, first only one or two every week, but the numbers increased. The clans are panicking, they don't know what to make of the mysterious disappearances, they lash out at the RougeBand, sure that they are the enemy. Only to find out, they are wrong. A wolf, comes and warnes each clan that they must surrender the forest to Deathpack. Some clans are thinking of fleeing, others joining the wolves, still others staying to fight. They begin to believe that StarClan has left them, only to realize that they have sent a prophecy, and only the chosen ones will succeed. What will the clans do? The RougeBand? What will you do? Tranquility's End Has Begun.

Then to defeat the wolves, each clan has to send two cats on a mission (still to be determined) and all eight cats have to make it back alive, if they do, they have to join DeathPack and then they will leave forever...

(The ending is OPEN for suggestions)

We would have auditions for the wolves, the cats that disappear and the cats that have to go on the mission.

If you have any ideas for the mission please post.

Also, when you answer this poll, please say what you chose and why.

Thank you,

~Tiger

[~"Jewel"~]

I'm down with it either way. ;D

[Flamefur]

Love it! I think they have to fetch someone or something for the wolves that is really dangerous to get, like maybe a wolf cub that was stolen by twolegs and taken far away or something. Great! If possible, I'd like a cat that disappears in RiverClan, and a cat that goes on the mission in ShadowClan.

[(¯`•Tiger•._)]

We'll see at the auditions! Great idea...

[moonstar]

i put absolutly, and Tiger you know why!

[| | Twilightstar | | Shadow]

I don't know.... This part is great:

The clans have been at peace for several seasons now. But beware, Tranquility's Ending. Cats have started to disappear, first only one or two every week, but the numbers increased. The clans are panicking, they don't know what to make of the mysterious disappearances, they lash out at the RougeBand, sure that they are the enemy. Only to find out, they are wrong. A wolf, comes and warnes each clan that they must surrender the forest to Deathpack. Some clans are thinking of fleeing, others joining the wolves, still others staying to fight. They begin to believe that StarClan has left them, only to realize that they have sent a prophecy, and only the chosen ones will succeed. What will the clans do? The RougeBand? What will you do? Tranquility's End Has Begun.

But it's this part that's weird:

......and all eight cats have to make it back alive, if they do, they have to join DeathPack and then they will leave forever...

Maybe if you changed the very ending, it would be 100% okay with me... Don't you find it weird that a pack of wolves would want 8 cats to join their pack? And even if they were just... oh say... planning on eating them... what would stop them from just eating the rest of the Clans? Since they obviously have the power to do that.... A wolf would take all the free food it could get.

[(¯`•Tiger•._)]

Yeah, I was thinking the same thing, maybe like Flame said, the cats could just rescue something for the DeathPack but didn't join?

[| | Twilightstar | | Shadow]

I'm not quite sure what we could do... but we definately should change the ending, because the rest of the plot is a masterpiece.... I'll think about it... But I'm leaning torwards "They should find an unexpected ally"

[Flamefur]

I like the ally thing, but how would they meet the ally?

[| | Twilightstar | | Shadow]

Perhaps the Clans send out a few scouts, to go look for help. The scouts find _____ that have been attacked by the dogs. So the scouts offer to combine forces, and the other accepts, so they become ally's. They combine forces, and BAM! We are all saved... but the question is... What type of animal would it be? Horses!? Yay!

[Flamefur]

No, I have a feeling it should be a member of the cat family...

[| | Twilightstar | | Shadow]

Puuuhleeeeaaaaaaase. Np, JK! But whatever.

[(¯`•Tiger•._)]

So 5 people out of 18 have voted... VOTE PEOPLE!!! Please?

(The ending is still open for suggestions and is not set in stone)

[(¯`•Tiger•._)]

People Who have voted: Bravo!

~"Jewel"~
Flamefur
.:.:Fastfoot:.:.
Aspenbrook
moonstar

People who need to Vote:
DeathMask
Twilightstar
Dreamheart
Ariel
Breezy
Moonflower
Rainwhiskers
Redfeather
Riv
Morningdew
Sunfang

[^_~Softy~_^]

I totally love the idea! maybe the ally could be a bear.... a bear can fight wolfs .... i'll tell ya if i can think of anything else!