moonstar
New Warrior
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Dawn
Mar 20, 2007 20:47:56 GMT -5
Post by moonstar on Mar 20, 2007 20:47:56 GMT -5
Name: Dawn Age: 17 moons Clan: Loner Description: She is orange with a white chest. She has turquise eyes. She has matted fur. Her whiskers are tangled up together. Physical Description: She has orange fur with a white chest. She has turqoiset always show her emotion. When she is sad, her eyes are murky, when she is excited her eyes are bright, and when she is up to somthin her eyes are dark. Her tail is long for a cat tail. Her tail twitches when she is nervous. The tip of her her tail is white. Her legs have white on them. Personality: She is sweet, and lets the clans stay on her territory on their way to share tongues with StarClan. She does not always feel safe around strangers. She is very tough. She almost always has somthing on her mind. She likes to take risks, but can also be very cautious. She is willing to help any cat in need. History: She was born in a kittypet home. She and her kin escaped and met the clans. They decided to stay, but her family died of Green Cough. She then left to live alone. StarClan has sent her many dreams, probably more than they send a medicine cat, and they say her family has gone to StarClan. Her family has visted her in dreams many times. Photo: www.humanesociety.com/images/lionking.jpg
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Dawn
Mar 20, 2007 20:56:33 GMT -5
Post by (¯`•Tiger•._) on Mar 20, 2007 20:56:33 GMT -5
Personality and physical description need to be longer.
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moonstar
New Warrior
Posts: 340
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Dawn
Mar 20, 2007 21:00:54 GMT -5
Post by moonstar on Mar 20, 2007 21:00:54 GMT -5
Ok!
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Dawn
Mar 21, 2007 8:11:41 GMT -5
Post by (¯`•Tiger•._) on Mar 21, 2007 8:11:41 GMT -5
I'm sorry, but if your a rp teacher, I need the bios to be at least 6 sentences for each section.
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moonstar
New Warrior
Posts: 340
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Dawn
Mar 22, 2007 16:33:15 GMT -5
Post by moonstar on Mar 22, 2007 16:33:15 GMT -5
Ok... ill fix it.
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Dawn
Mar 22, 2007 18:56:11 GMT -5
Post by (¯`•Tiger•._) on Mar 22, 2007 18:56:11 GMT -5
Ok accepted.
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