moonstar
New Warrior
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Post by moonstar on Mar 11, 2007 21:41:24 GMT -5
Name: Sparkherb
Gender: She-cat
Age: 20 Moons
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Medicine Cat
Physical Desciption: She has a black pelt with white specks all over pelt it. She has murky blue eyes like in the lake. Her paws have more specks of white than the rest of her body. Her belly is a pale pink.
Personality: She can sometimes get tempered but is very nice ounce you get to know her. She has always been interested in history. She perfers not to eat birds, for there are too many feathers. She is very loving.
History: She has one brother named Blizardpaw who is pure white. Her mother is snowy white and is named Snowherb. Her father is a grayish-blue named Bluespot. She was ounce caught by twolegs but escaped when they were about toput her in a monster to go to the cutter.
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Post by (¯`•Tiger•._) on Mar 11, 2007 21:43:35 GMT -5
Can you make it longer and in complete sentences?
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moonstar
New Warrior
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Post by moonstar on Mar 11, 2007 21:52:09 GMT -5
Ok, can i modify it?
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Post by (¯`•Tiger•._) on Mar 11, 2007 21:59:03 GMT -5
Yes. ^^
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Post by (¯`•Tiger•._) on Mar 12, 2007 15:46:21 GMT -5
Since you're applying for a high postion, could you please make each one at least two sentences longer?
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Post by (¯`•Tiger•._) on Mar 12, 2007 20:58:22 GMT -5
Ok, accepted.
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